I am a Year 8 at St Pius X Catholic School in Auckland. I am in Room 7 and my Teacher is Mrs Tui.
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Wow amazing illustration about your writing! Great work keep it up Kalo!!
Woah Kalo cool illustration I like how you added ever little detail. Keep it up
Hey Kalolaine,I really liked your narrative writing. I especially liked how you put in interesting words and added a cool picture.Once I had the same feeling when my family went for a walk once. I got the feeling someone was following us.Please check and re-read your writing.Keep up the good work Kalolaine.
Hi Kalolaine, Wow your narrative was really scary and interesting. If I heard voices and was seeing things I would have freaked out to. Keep up the good work!