Tuesday, 25 June 2013

My Pool description

I am going to talk about my wonderful life in the pool.

Our Pool is 15 meters long, 1 meter deep and the walls of the pool are curled like a skateboard ramp. The ground around the pool is wet like it has been raining. The water is see through like the wind and the water is calm like a mirror. It is warm like a heater but can sometimes be cold like ice.

The Pool smells like chlorine and it was very dirty at the bottom of the pool. Did you know that the pool is as deep as a pond? The water is as blue as the sky and the waves in the pool are like the waves in the sea.

I wish that we could go in the pool everyday for the whole term.


  1. hi Kalolaine,

    I really like how you describe what the pool smells like how it feels. I also like how you used paragraph in your writing. Keep up the good writing.

  2. Awesome description about the swimming pool kalolaine and always have a nice day.