Friday, 25 October 2013

The girl who got bullied at school!!!!


  1. Hi Kalolaine what a lovely piece of writing that you have written on storybird. What I like about this story is when Ashley was at Karate class and she learnt to have some courage. Maybe next time you could make more photos that had happened in that story.

  2. Hi Kalolanie
    I like your story that you made up and it is a wonderful piece of writing that you have done also I like the pictures that you chose for your story next time I think you would like to write a bit more